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Sweet home… What pleasant words you can say. But for me it is difficult to agree with this.
When people hear these words they usually go to their thoughts to some quiet and safe place, where they usually have to relax and rest for their souls and bodies from a long difficult workday.
But it is not my case. When I hear the word home, I remember only the war with my neighbors. And I can’t really understand the reason for it because I'm a rather calm person and don’t make parties at home. But the cat had run between us. So my neighbors do all the things you can imagine to make hell around me. Firstly they do repairs everyday for long hours. I come from work in the evening and I want to be in peace and silence but I have to listen to hammer and drill sounds. Ok. Then the time to go to bed and have dreams comes. At this time my neighbors like moving furniture and suddenly dropping things, watching TV at full volume, and also playing with their cat, which runs like an elephant.
For all these gifts I of course pay them with the same things and funny songs. But the war is still going on and no one is giving up…
Sprache: Englisch   Sprachwissen: Muttersprachler, Kompetenz, Fortgeschrittene


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Sweet home… What pleasant words to say. But for me it is difficult to agree.
When a person hears these words they usually go in their thoughts to some quiet and safe place, where they usually relax and rest their soul and body after a long, difficult day of work.
But that is not the case for me. When I hear the word "home, " I remember only the war with my neighbors. I canot really understand the reason for my reaction because I am a rather calm person and do not have parties at home.
But
the cat had run between us. So my neighbors do all the things you can imagine to make hell for me. They do repairs every day for long hours. I come home from work in the evening and I want to have peace and quiet, but I have to listen to hammer and drill sounds. OK. Then the time to go to bed and have dreams comes. At this time my neighbors like moving furniture and suddenly dropping things, watching TV at full volume, and playing with their cat, which runs like an elephant.
For all these gifts I of course repay them with the same things and funny songs. But the war is still going on and no one is giving up…
GrossLearning:  I used gender-neutral they for "a person" , but you could have this as in the original, but "people" doesn't sound right . "Giving up" doesn't capture what you probably want: surrendering or capitulating. It just depends in how strong tou want to reinforce the war metaphor.
A funny piece that I enjoyed reading!

GrossLearning:  Sorry: cannot, not canot
Avoid contractions in formal written English.

GrossLearning:  One more: with the same and with funny songs.


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