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Speaking sbout school uniform in Ukraine I have to say that it is one of the most difficult problems of education in Ukraine, because we don't have any standardiz­ed scool form at all. We standardiz­ed fireman uniforms, uniform of doctors, we have recently invented a new uniform for the police, but we have never thought about school uniform despite the fact that the number of pupils is much more than the number of doctors, policemen and firemen. Of course, the discussing of school uniform isn't in priority of Ukraine now, but we have to make it once. As you know every school have their own unique symbols, so we just need to do the same thing with the school uniform. But it is easy to say, because the eternal excuse of our government is that we don't have enough money. So we must do it ourselves. But there is a little important thing, which sometimes don't give us to sleep - the concept of individual­ity. We all know that we are individual­s and we expree ourselves in different ways. There are two main thoughts about school uniform: the first one says "It is good to be the same. You can express yourself as you want, everybody sees you, not your dress", and the second one says that people in uniforms are invisible, that nobody notices the individual. And if you saw our today's "form", you would say like the second one's. The good example of school unform shows us Japan, where schools have strandarti­zed form, but htey decorate them on their way, it is not hardly to understand where is the student from one school and student from another one. So why we can't do the same? It will be good if we can escape our boring stuff. And there are many examples such as Japan all around the world. In my opinion, it is good to be the same, because we are the same. We all have hands, legs, ears, eyes etc. , but we are different inside. With new stylish uniform you don't have to think everyday what to wear, you just need to be yourself. And it is wonderful, isn't is?
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School uniform in Ukraine is one of the most difficult problems of education, because we don't have any standardiz­ed school uniform at all. We standardiz­ed firemen and doctors' uniforms, we have recently invented a new uniform for the police, but we have never thought about school uniforms despite the fact that the number of pupils is much bigger than the number of doctors, policemen and firemen. Of course, the topic of school uniform isn't a priority Ukraine now, but it will have to be faced once and for all. As you know every school has their own unique symbols, so we just need to do the same thing with the school uniform. But it is easy to say, because the eternal excuse of our government is that we don't have enough money, so we must do it ourselves. But there is a little important thing, which sometimes doesn't give us sleep - the concept of individual­ity. We all know that we are individual­s and we express ourselves in different ways. There are two main thoughts about school uniform: the first one is that it's good to be the same. You can express yourself as you want. Everybody will see you, not your dress; the second one says that people in uniforms are invisible, that nobody notices the individual. And if you saw today's "uniform", you'd associate us to the latters. The good example of school unform shows us Japan, where schools have strandarti­zed form, but pupils decorate them on their own. It is not hard to make a difference between students there and to understand from which school they come from. So why can't we do the same? It will be nice to escape our boring "non-uniform". There are many examples all around the world similar to Japan's. In my opinion, it is good to be the same, because we are the same. We all have hands, legs, ears, eyes etc. , but we are different inside. With new stylish uniforms you don't have to think everyday what to wear, you just need to be yourself. And it is wonderful, isn't it?

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